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25 januari 2012 - 8:19pm
Here's the lyrics to a song I'm working on. What do you guys think? Is the concept clear?
Verse 1
My heart has grown cold
Along this road
Inside I long for so much more.
I want to know
More of your power
More of your Spirit at work in me.
Chorus
Take my breath away, take my breath away
With my hands held high I sing
Take my breath away, take my breath away
With the wonder of who you are
I’m desperate for you
Verse 2
Lord give me faith
More of your passion
To pray ‘Lord let your kingdom come’.
I want to see
More of your glory
More of your miracles today.
act justly, love mercy, walk humbly
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Hi Sarah
im not sure about the line (lord give me faith) and (to pray 'lord let your kingdom come)
how about
Lord more of you
More of your passion
I pray ‘let your spirit come.
I want to see you
More of your glory
More of your miracles today.
this is more of a holy spirit song to me than a lord song. i really like the rest of the words to your song.